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Word Hole #2

Writing Workshop Critiques of The Old Testament
by Michelle Hogmire

– You know what would really help all those chapters about laws? Show don’t tell.

– None of these characters truly change by the end. Unless you consider getting slaughtered in a senseless battle change.

– Do we really need the genealogy of every single character? More importantly, do we need it twice?

Word Hole #1

bad writing advice by colin sullivan
find god or an advanced alternative. learn the steps but do not confuse them with the bill of rights. while praying to your god, re-evaulate the semi-colon. give it a hard look.